8/12/08 11:35 am - emosasquatch - Needs Moar Zombies [Part one of two]
Title: Late Dawns... (If this fic was inspired by that song, where the hell are the zombies?)
Rating: Only three this time-- badly-written and the grammar makes baby Jesus cry, but the content isn't so bad and it's fairly short.
Characters: Frank and Gerard with a side of Ray (for about five seconds.)
Annoying Traits: Cliches abound, Frank calling Gerard "Skippy," and the use of beer pong for evil. Also Gerard waxing purple poetry, though I find this to be somewhat IC.
Sporker's Comments: Honestly, content-wise, this would be a fairly cute little fic. Buuut, sadly, the grammar and poor execution ruined any chance it had. Shame, really.
Soon to come: Part two, which features soap opera amounts of DRAMA. :O